Hi, thanks for your comments!
It would be great to get your ideas on this one too.
There is some weirdness with the candles at the very end (to be fixed). And also the ending should be slowed down.
But does it work well with the text?
For the next lines I'm thinking of turning the last image here into a city landscape or a street.
The smoke coming from the candles would be the smoke coming out of the chimneys of two houses maybe. But first I need to make sure this is ok.
I hope this works so far!